Brian Pilkington

thanks for the info. i have changed Count Drachunts name to Count Dasgan. how do you think this sounds. i've also added my chapter 2, if you'd like to read ...

Chapter 2: The Great Escape Drachunt swore at the top of his voice. He stood there for several minutes, letting the anger come into him. How could this have happened? ...

My legs took off, my mind and body still struggling to calm myself down. I stifled a scream. It was following me. Whatever it was, it was running after me. ...

“Did ya hear?” Faylen asked me as we left the café. “About Jeni’s boy? Yes. It’s absolutely awful he was kidnapped.” I glanced towards the forest on the left side ...

Uruvion sniffed the cold, rancid air of the night. Being an elf he had better sense of smell than any human. Throughout the 203 years of his life, Uruvion had ...

It's kinda cheesy, but it was a writing assignment in 8th grade last year, and I had writer's block with my other idea xD Hope you like it I was ...

i absolutely love it. i think it flows great. i would love to read more of your stuff. its fantastic. i have one thing to say: i think it could ...

i think this is great. it really moved me. i like poems and would like to see some more of yours. keep up the great writing.

Chapter 1: The Trap The swish of a cloak was the only sound to be heard, on a dark, damp night, as Count Drachunt rounded the corner of a curvy, ...

i thought the start was very good. makes the reader want to read on. i liked the rest of it too. you've obvously thought about his alot. continue writing, this ...

I liked it, but at first didn't, until i read on. It only picks up in the middle of the chapter. hHowever i do like the characters, and the way ...